We did an electron lab station assignment with 4 stations to learn about electrons and what they attract/repel to.
First station: This station had a balloon were you generated static on the balloon and we had to find out if we generated enough static on the balloon too attract confetti to the balloon.
One of our observations were that it took a lot of static to attract the big sheet of confetti but less to attract the small confetti. My hypothesis before was that it would attract the confetti and the really big sheet of confetti so i was right all along and so was my group. This station was something i already knew so it was pretty much old stuff but it was alright.
Second station: This station was about Cutting off two pieces of tape and try to put the un sticky sides together to see if they would attract or reppel and they attracted to eachother we observed that we also messed up because the two tape pieces attracted together so much that the sticky sides stuck to eachother and we were like WHOAH!. I hyphothesised that they would attract.
Third station: This station was basically the same as the second one but this time we attracted only one un sticky side to the sticky side and they attracted to eachother also, one of the observations we made that it was hard to like see how they attracted but they attracted to eachother pretty fast. On this station i hypothesised they would also attract and my group agreed with me i do onot have any questions for this lab .
Fourth station: This station was about charging the balloon with electrons and put it next to running water and see if it attracted or repeled when my group first tried it me and my homie saw that the water repeled and my group "leader" said "no it didnt" and we rubbed the balloon on my homies head and he was like owww! and he put it next to the running water and it attracted like crazy and we like OHHH SHNITWHIZTER! this station was my favorite one because it was pretty cool that the water was attracted to that balloon i predicted that it would do nothing but apparently it attracted pretty cool lab though.
Thursday, March 12, 2009
Wednesday, September 24, 2008
feng shui
For our mini project in class we learned about feng shui which is an art in object placement. we had to "feng shui" our rooms which basically means to create positive energy flow throughout our house/rooms. Its just moving around objects/furniture into a feng shui way. These four elements: Fire, earth, metal, water supposedly effect health, wealth and personal relationships in a positive way,if the objects are placed in a certain way.
Some people say that when objects are placed the "feng shui" way they feel calmer and more positive about their life.
Some people say that when objects are placed the "feng shui" way they feel calmer and more positive about their life.
Monday, September 15, 2008
How could Qigong help in daily life?
Chi kung is what it is called in english qigong is used for ancient chinese culture. The art of developing vital energy particularly for health, vitality, mind expansion and spiritual cultivation. It is used in Asia and is used to test your ki and to maintain daily life balance it is said that chi kung can help you live longer and keep you staying healthy so u can do backflips when ur 40 years old it can help get rid of stress and keep your energy levels high and in shape. You can Do meditation breath in for 5 seconds hold it in for 5 seconds and breath out for 5 seconds things like that can keep your body healthy and in shape I've tried it and it is very relaxing and you can spread ki energy throughout your body liek if you have a messed up knee and you stand still for about a minute your can feel that messed up knee like throbbing theres alot of information on this type of exersice your should try it.
Friday, September 12, 2008
Vocabulary quiz #1
The main idea of this article is to build a 30 storie skyscraper thats supposed to be used as a farm . These people would be nomadicaly looking for all there supplies for food, water, and building materials it would take a while to build it. Also they will have to cultivate the building to maintain food production. The people that decide to build the building also were determinant to build this building that proccesses food. The building might be good for the energy crisis in manhattan but it might not dependant on prices of irrigating the building also? No one really knows how people are going to domesticate meat produce if they are going to farm that also.
My thought in this article are also people wont be sedentary they will be farming all day and be working alot. Will they have to codify for this new project who knows how many laws will take in affect or be taken away. The people making this projet beilieve that there plants they will be farming will be fertile and dealt with swiflty the transportation will be wasting gallons of gas while transporting all there plants, these plants will have to be fertile in another 5 years because once there all out of supplies no more food to farm they will have to transport again.
My thought in this article are also people wont be sedentary they will be farming all day and be working alot. Will they have to codify for this new project who knows how many laws will take in affect or be taken away. The people making this projet beilieve that there plants they will be farming will be fertile and dealt with swiflty the transportation will be wasting gallons of gas while transporting all there plants, these plants will have to be fertile in another 5 years because once there all out of supplies no more food to farm they will have to transport again.
Tuesday, May 20, 2008
my story of this stroy i made up kinda bad at writing it but itl do
-THE AMERICAN SOLDIERPANEL 1:NARRATIVE: Abel was studying on his math homework at school listening to the whipping flag outside with it saying GERMANY 1938 thinking about the answer to the problem when his friend came inside to help him.Adal: Hey I heard we had a math test today, did you pass?Abel: No, my teacher said I have to stay after school to study my test and finish it.Adel: Oh, well that sucks for you (he said sarcastically), I passed my test *laughs*SCENE: Adel is in school and is studying his test while Abel it talking to him about him passing his.PANEL 2:Adel: Ill tell you what, ill help you with your math test and you help me in science.Abel: Ok, then help me with my test.SCENE: They’re both studying on there test and he’s helping him solve problems at school.PANEL 3:
NARRATOR: While Adel is helping Abel with his test Abel finishes his test with the help of his best friend Adel since 2nd grade.Abel: Thanks for helping me with my test.Adel: No problem that’s what I do.SCENE: They’re walking down the hallway and talking about the test.PANEL 4:Abel: Hey want to go to Garry’s house?Adel: Oh sure, wanna play Baseball at his house?SCENE: Their walking to There friends house (Garry).PANEL 5:NARRATIVE: Garry pops out of nowhere and shoot down his friends with his bbgun, while his friends duck for cover behind the trashcans like it was a barbarian assault.Garry: Did I kill anyone?Abel: Almost!SCENE: Abel and Adel ducked behind trashcans too avoid getting shot with Garry’s Rifle.PANEL 6:Abel: Hey you almost shot my eye out with that thing!Garry: *laughs* sorry guys I just wanna take a shot at someone I wasn’t gonna shoot you or anything my parents don’t mind anyway.SCENE: Abel and Adel get out from behind the trashcans.Panel 7:Abel and Adel: Hey stop firing! Garry: You guys never wanna do anything with me!Scene: All of them are in the lot getting ready to head on home.Narrative: The next day at school.
PANEL 8:
Teacher: Ok students something has arisen in this country today, we have gotten new test books, Garry can you pass out the new textbooks.
Abel: New?
Garry: ok
NARRARATOR: Garry passes the books to everyone and sits down.
SCENE: Garry is passing out text books around with a strange look on his face, Abel looks through the text book and is surprised to see that this guy names Hitler was the greatest person in the world and so was Germany the greatest country in the world.
Teacher: We will learn more about this tomorrow! Dismissed! Panel 10: Narrator: Abel and Adel talk about if they finished their homework.Abel: Hey did you finish your homework?Adel: Yeah, I did –*The German people need to revolt against those who are inferior to the German race! There is no one better than us and these united nations will pay for what they did to us and we are the best Germans out there!Abel: What the hell was that??Narrator: Abel looked around on the walls of the classroom and saw what appeared to be what looked like Germans being compared to other “phony” Germans.SCENE: The class is looking out the windows wondering what is happening, while the teacher was trying to calm the class down.Panel 12:Adel: I think that was Adolf Hitler making his speeches to the German people.Abel: I’ve never heard of him before.Adel: Oh, well you should he’s a great person with a big dream.Abel: cool, ill try and look him up, I’m gonna go to the library after school.SCENE: The class is getting all riled up about Hitler making his speech.Panel 13:Narrative: Later that night… he enters the libraryAbel: Hey Madam.Madam: hey Abel, what are you looking up today?Abel: just some research on Adolf Hitler.Madam: Oh, I can already tell you who he is.SCENE: He talking to the librarian lady who is telling him about Adolf Hitler.PANEL 14:Madam: Hitler is a great man with great dreams and he is now Chancellor of Germany.Abel: What is he doing right now? I mean like what is this big fuss about his speeches.Madam: Well These non- Aryans, these Jewish people, these non German people are taking our economy and now Germany has no money they have been taking all the jobs and screwing up our economy he is planning to just get rid of all these non blooded German people in our country and uhh setting them aside…SCENE: The librarian is telling Abel who Hitler is and telling him what a great thing he is doing for his country.PANEL 15:Abel: wow I never knew about our economy being that horrible.Madam: That’s why we just to make this country better we will just send them away.Abel: What is the country of Germany to do about these non-blooded Germans?Madam: uhhh-Abel: Are they planning to kill them all? I mean what else is there to do?Abel: He will kill a bunch of innocent people, will he!?Madam: Sir, you can’t yell in this library, and I’m sure there is another way.Abel: Hitler will kill a bunch of innocent people just because their not German?!?!?!?!?!?!?SCENE: Abel is yelling at the librarian about how evil Hitler is.PANEL 16:Abel: He can’t just kill all the non German people just because of what he thinks!!Madam: I’m sorry that you have been kicked out of the library.Abel: you know what! You and Hitler can go to hell.SCENE: That the librarian is kicking out Abel while Abel is still cursing at Madam.PANEL 17:Narrator: Garry is surprisingly at the library shooting peoples reading glasses off while their reading. He over hears the conversation between him and at the next day at school Garry tells his friends about what happened at the library.Abel: hey guys guess what happened at the library?Garry: I know what happened.Abel: Oh really?Garry: This guy is arguing with the librarian about Hitler.Adel: Hey, Hitler is a good guy I think we should listen to him after all, He is our führer.Abel: you know, Hitler, he’s gonna kill a bunch of innocent Jews because of his stupid speech he made?Garry: Hey his speeches were awesome! You don’t even know! What kind of German are you! (Punches Abel in the face)Abel: What the hell is wrong with you!?Garry: he deserve it; Hitler is our father of this country!SCENE: Abel is laying on the floor with blood trickling down his face. While Garry is still screaming at him.NARRATOR: Adel is looking at Abel laying on the ground Adel is looking at him deciding to help him, but leaves with his friends.PANEL 15:NARRATOR: The next day Abel goes to school and sits quietly in his seat, the class gives him dirty looks even the teacher.Teacher: The principal would like to see you inside the office Mr. WeberAbel: ok…. *gets up and walks out, someone throws a paper ball at his head*Teacher: GARRY!!-NARRATOR: He walks into the principles office and takes a seat…Principle: I heard about your little problem yesterday?Abel: Oh, it was nothing.Principle: Didn’t sound like nothing almost the whole school knows about the little fight you and Garry had.Abel: *sighs* Its just I guess my friends don’t like me talking about Hitler..SCENE: The principle and Abel are talking about what happened yesterday.PANEL 16:Principle: Hitler? He is too young for you to understand.Abel: Well I know enough that he is not right for our country, He is gonna kill thousands of Jewish people to solve this economy issue!Principle: You know I told you your to young to understand.Abel: God you stupid people don’t know what your doing! The next thing you know your gonna start a world war because other people disagree between your genocide! *storms out of the office and building*SCENE: he walks out of the building and goes to his house.PANEL 17:Mom: Hey son are you ok? I though school got out late today?Abel: The kids are beating me up and teasing me because I don’t believe in Hitler and his speeches! I don’t like Hitler at all.Mom: Um I’m sure if knew his dream you would understand him.Abel: I don’t understand why no one will disagree with Hitler….Mom: Look you will fit in perfectly fine if maybe you can understand Hitler and his sayings.Abel: No one understands what the hell their doing around here anymore! We are killing so many people with this war like situation, I mean im getting beat up and teased just because of what I think!! *storms out of house*Mom: Honey…-SCENE: The son and mom are arguing about the school situation and Hitler Abel storms out of the house.PANEL 18: Narrator: Abel is walking along the street thinking about how much his life is screwed up “ I should move to somewhere else when I’m older”…He goes back to school and sees his former friends. Garry: Hey! Its Abel Adel: hey Abel… Abel: Are you guys gonna make fun of me again? Garry: ha-ha, damn right. Abel: Look how about you forget about what I think and just move on. Garry; We don’t want no Jewish believers in our country, your not a real German! Abel: fine maybe ill move!!. Garry: Move then, id like to see that.SCENE: Abel goes back to school during lunch to eat.PANEL 19: Garry: Get out of here we don’t want you in our school!! Abel: I have the right to stay in this school if I want to. Garry: hey guys this guy is a Jewish Believer and he hates Hitler for it! Adel: hey, Garry just stop messing with him we don’t want any problems. Garry: No, this basterd doesn’t belong in this school or our country!Scene: Abel, Garry, Adel and other school members are in the lunch hall eating and Abel is getting picked on again.Panel 20: Narrator: The next day at Abel’s house. Abel is talking on the phone to his Dad So he drops out of high school and his parents don’t mind as long as he gets an education in America. Abel: Hey, so you don’t mind right Dad: No not at all son, you’re always welcome to come here. You just have to know that this will be a big change for you. Abel: Yeah well right about now that’s what I’m looking for. Dad: So do you know when you will be coming over? Abel: Maybe in four or five days, right now I just have to get the plane ticket. Dad: Well I hope to see you soon. Abel: yeah me to. Dad: see you in America. Abel: Bye.Scene: Abel is sitting in his room talking to his dad who is in America. And talking to his dad about how is going to move over to America where he knows that he will be able to say what he wants.Panel 21: Narrator: Abel and his mom are talking to his mom about the move that he is going to leave soon and live with his dad. Abel: Look mom I’m doing this for my own good I cant go anyplace without getting beat up or picked on and personally I am tired of it. Mom: Okay son I understand just promise me you will write to me. Abel: Mom I will, and don’t worry I will be fine.
….Scene: Abel and his mom are sitting in their living room talking about the move. Abel’s mom is sad about the move but she is starting to understand where he is coming from.Panel 22: Narrator: Abel is saying goodbye to his mom and Adel. He decided not to bother about his other friends because he knew that he would just end up getting harassed again. Abel: Well I guess this is it… Adel: Hey man I hope you do alright over there okay, take it easy. Abel: alright, ill write to you about how America is. Adel: hope you don’t get killed over there too. Mom: Son I just want you to know that if you ever want to come back I have no problem. I want you to be careful okay, I love you. Abel: I love you too mom. (Gives her a hug and kiss goodbye)Scene: Adel, Abel, and his mom are at the airport getting ready to say goodbye, before Abel boards his plain.Panel 23: Narrator: Abel thinks to himself about his opportunity to go to America for a better life. Abel: Wow finally I get to get away from those bastards, always calling me names and beating me up. Narrator: Abel falls to sleep on the way over to America. When he wakes up he is in America for his first time.Scene: Abel is in the plane, and then transfers over to America when he wakes up.Panel 24: Narrator: Abel isn’t used to all the lights and noise that he is recognizing. He tries to find his way to his dad’s house. He tries to find a way to contact his dad and finds a payphone at the airport. Abel: Excuse me sir, do you know were a payphone is? Sir: Yeah, its over there next to the food stand. Abel: thanks Sir: No problem.Scene: Abel gets to the airport and is walking to a pay phone.Panel 25: Narrator: Abel picks up the payphone and puts in random coins until he hears the ringtone in the phone. Abel: Dad! I’m in America! I’m in New York City. Dad: really? I didn’t know it was gonna be this early. Abel: How do I get to your house Father? Dad: Don’t worry ill give you the directions.SCENEL: Abel’s father is giving his son directions to get to his house.Panel 26: Dad: Ok? Got that? Abel: yeah I have it all down. Dad: ok cool see you here. Abel: Um, dad how do I get there? Dad: I just gave you the- Abel: yeah I know but like how? Ride a bus or something? Dad: oh.. I forgot about that I don’t know son I don’t think it’s far from here though. Abel: ok I guess ill walk then. Dad: see ya son. Abel: bye father.Scene: Abel and Father are talking on the payphone.PANEL 27: Narrator: Abel walks out of the airport and takes a deep breath. *wow I like this place already. Abel: “whoa” Abel says to himself as he looks around. Narrator: Abel walks along the streets crowded with pedestrians at the new pizza place that just opened. – “Congratulations on the new carls Jr. that just opened! Unfortunately Carl is not with us today he is busy creating new burgers!” *laughter* Abel looked at the restaurant astounded. He’s never seen so many people crowded around a restaurant. Abel: excuse me sire what is this? Sir 2: This is Carls JR my friend! It has the best burgers in the state wanna try one when it opens? Abel: really? Sir 2: yeah man I’m so exited this is your lucky day. Here’s a buck. Abel: A buck? Sir 2: ha-ha yeah in other words a dollar. Hey where are you from? Abel: uhhh, I’m from… I forgot the name of the country… Sir 2: ha-ha I like you kid c’mon lets go inside.Scene: Abel and this guy go inside Carls Jr. and they order a milkshake and a regular burger. Narrator: “Here’s your change” the cashier said Abel: Hey is that money? Sir 2: yeah it’s an American dollar. Abel: cool, wow this food is amazing. Sir 2: I told you, we should come here often, where do you live? Abel: well I’m trying to find my dad… he uh moved somewhere. Sir 2: where he live?Scene: Abel and the stranger talk for a while he offers him a ride home.Panel 28: Narrator: Abel tells the stranger where he lives and they get into his car and take him to his dads. Sir 2; is this it? Abel: Uhh check the address I don’t know. Sir 2: yeah this is it. Abel: thanks Sir 2: no problem. Abel: bye.SCENE: Abel is Saying bye to the guy he just met and is going inside his father’s house.Panel 29: Narrator: Abel gets out of the car and walks to the front door of his dad’s house. Abel: *Knock Knock* Dad: I’m coming hold on! Abel: Dad…it’s me Abel. Dad: Son, it’s been such a long time, we have a lot to catch up on. Come in. Abel: Wow dad this is a nice place, compared to what mom has. Dad: eh it gets me by.Scene: Abel and his dad are finally meeting after a long time.Panel 30: Narrator: Abel and his Dad are talking to each other because they haven’t seen each other in a long time. Dad: So son what have you been up to lately? Abel; Well school never really goes that good, because people are always beating me up!! Dad: oh…….well why don’t you fight back? Abel: I don’t know I guess I just never had anyone to back me up. I really never had any friends. Scene: Abel and his dad are talking how his life was and just catching up with their lives.Panel 31: Narrator: Abel and his dad are watching TV and are watching their favorite TV show. When a news flash comes on. *War break out in Europe, tune to channel thirteen for more information* Abel: Wow dad can you believe this, and to think that I was just there. Dad: I know, I hope your mother is okay. Abel: Those bastards they shouldn’t just have the right to go in an start a war with us. Scene: Abel and his dad are sitting in the living room watching TVPanel 32: Narrator: Abel is looking for a job as seeing that this will be where he is going to live his life. Abel: Hmmmm…..no, maybe. Dad: Why you talking to yourself, are you crazy or something? Abel: No dad I am just looking for a job. Dad: O well why don’t you try working at that burger place. Abel: I will go check it out, hey dad I am going to leave to see if there is an opening. Dad: Okay see you when you get home. Scene: Abel and his dad are talking about jobs in their kitchen.Panel 33: Narrator: That next day… Abel: Hey dad last night when I got home I guess you were gone so, I just wanted to let you know that I got the job and I start on Monday. Dad: That’s good son. You know this war is starting to get to become a big deal even though its far away. Abel: Yeah I know but I don’t think we have anything to worry about dad. I just hope that Adel and mom are alright. Dad: I guess your right son Scene: Its morning time at the house and Abel and his dad are sitting down talking about his new job and the war that’s currently going on in Europe.Panel 34: Narrator: Time has passed bye Abel has been working at Carls Jr. for about four days now and liking the job. Dad: Hey son come here real quickly you got a letter in the mail. Abel: Huh a letter…let me see it. Maybe its from Adel or mom. Dad: Well what does it say? Abel: It says….that I have been drafted into the war; they need more soldiers I leave in a week. Dad: What?!?!, they cant just do this to you those bastards what the hell is there problem Scene: Abel and his dad are sitting on the couch flipping through the mail when a letter comes up for Abel and he reads it.Panel 35: Narrator: Abel is lying on his bed writing a letter to his mom telling her what has just happened: Abel: I have been drafted into the US Army. I guess my stay over here isn’t going as how I had planned it. I hope you are okay. I will try my best to stay alive over there. I have heard that’s its pretty crazy. From, Your son Abel.Panel 36: Narrator. Abel is getting ready to go to work for his last day. Abel: Dad I’m going to work now, see you when I get home! Dad: Okay see you when you get home.Scene: Abel is standing at the front door saying goodbye to his dad before he leaves for work.Panel 36: Narrator: Abel is getting home from work his dad is already eating dinner and Abel goes to join him. Dad: How was work? Abel: Ok, besides the fact that I have to leave for Europe tomorrow and go into war. *Says with sarcastic remark* Dad: I know.. I’ll miss you son! God pray you come back alive. (hugs Abel)
Abel: Don’t worry dad I will, you know your starting to sound like mom right before I left for America. *light chuckle* Scene: Abel and his dad are sitting down eating dinner and talking about when he leaves to go off to war.Panel 36: Narrator: Abel is getting ready to leave where he will meet up with the other future soldiers who have been drafted. Abel: Well dad I guess this is it. Dad: Yeah son it is. Take care okay. I know that it will probably be hard for you to write but if you can please write. Abel: Okay I will. It was good seeing you again. Scene: Abel is saying good bye to his dad and getting ready to leave for the area where he is meeting the others.Panel 37: Narrator: Abel gets into and tells the taxi cab driver where to take him. Abel: Take me to Smith and Montgomery please. Taxi Driver: I have taken a couple of others there today you one of those recruits ay. Abel: Yup just another one of those recruits. Taxi Driver: Well I wish you the best of luck over there. Abel: Thanks I just wish I wasn’t going.Scene: Abel is in the taxi getting ready to go to the spot where all the recruits are. Panel 38: Narrator: Abel gets on the bus and sits next to some guy with brown hair. The bus begins to drive off to the base. Abel: Hey my name is Abel. Max: Hey how you doing up man, where you from? Abel: Umm…. Well, Max: You don’t know where you’re from? Abel: … I am from Germany, *He says shyly knowing that this is who they are going to fight* Max: Wow that’s a tough place to come from and You sound German to, better not let anyone else know, or else your going to get your ass beat. Abel: Alright well it was nice meeting you where are you from? Max: I am from New York. Abel: Well…I am tired wake me up when the ride is over to the base.Scene: Abel and his friend that he just met on the bus are going to the base where all the other troops are.Panel 39: They recruits are about to reach the base and get assigned to where they will be staying until they get transported over to the drop zone in Europe. Its 10:00 pm at the base Max: Hey, hey man wake up were here. Abel: Huh? oh already wow that was fast. Max: Yeah they just announced that were all supposed to meet outside and that’s when we will be assigned to our rooms. Abel: Alright then let’s go.Scene: Abel and his friend are leaving the bus and going to their rooms. It is now one week till they deploy for Europe.Panel 40: Narrator: All of the recruits wake up to the sound of a loud bell and the general telling them to get up.General: Wake up you lazy recruits we only have one week to prepare for Europe* Abel: Oh great time to train just what I have always wanted to wake up to. Max: Come on put your boots on, we don’t have all day now do we. Abel: Calm down I’m going.Scene: Abel and the rest of the recruits are getting ready to go and train.Panel 41: Narrator: Three days has passed by there is now only three days left until they get ready to deploy. Abel: Hey man so you think that you’re ready for battle. Max: Eh not really I wish I was back home with my family instead of knowing that I am headed until battle. Abel: I watch your back and you watch mine we should be alright. Max: Yeah I guess so, well we better get some food. Scene: Abel and Max are getting ready to go to the lunch room at the base.Panel 42: Narrator: Abel and everyone else is getting ready to pack their clothes and items before they get ready to deploy. Abel: I don’t get how we only have a week. Max: Hey the American army needs more people. Abel: we don’t even train. Max: *laughs* Hell, with us in the war those Nazis don’t even have a day to train they need all the men they can get. Abel: I’m tired I’m going to bed. Max: Bed? How can you think of sleep at this time, after all were still in “training”? Abel: *sigh* Fine lets get back in their. Max: Ill arm-wrestle you. Abel: Arm wrestle? Max: yeah, why not I want to see how strong you are since last week. Scene: Max and Abel prepare to arm-wrestle.Panel 43: Abel: Alright. Max: ha you don’t stand a chance. Abel: oh, yeah. Narrator: they arm wrestle a bit and are their hands are an even match. Max: arghh! Ha beat yah. Abel: *chuckles* I’m tired man. Max: See I knew- General: Get up you lousy Basterds! Time to get on the plane to parachute into Norway! Abel: Norway? Max: Yes sir *puts up a salute to the General* Abel: Uhhh Yes Sir!! Scene: The two soldiers salute to the General with a surprised look on their face.Panel 44: General: Let’s move lets move!!! Max: let’s go Abel. General: Holt their soldier! Your names Abel? Abel: uhh yeesssss sirrrr *shudders’* General: *laughs* No need to be scared soldier theirs a company on our team called the Abel company and you and the rest of your squad will parachute together onto Norway and help Abel company demo the tanks that are holding our ground. Abel: Why us????! *whimpers* General: Are you gonna whimper like my dog did when he had to sniff out my lost socks?! Abel: No sir! General: lets go kill these Nazi bastards! Abel: I will kill these!- *cries* Scene: General is yelling at Abel And telling him to coward out. General: What’s wrong with you! Get up! Narrator: Max whispers in Generals ear that he came from Germany and lived there all his life. General: Oh, *Straightens up* your in America son! Dry up those tears and get outside! Abel: Ok sir. Max: C’mon lets get on that plane. Narrator: Abel and max get on the plane and aboard it with their other group.Panel 45: Narrator: Max and Abel, and including all the other recruits are on the plane meeting others. When John Coffman comes up to the two, and introduces himself. When John finds out Abel’s accent. John: Hey what’s up? Max: Hey are you in our group too? John: Yeah, why do you think that were on this plane together. Abel: *Snickers* (Abel doesn’t feel so shy anymore) you’re a funny guy John: huh? You sound like one of them Kraut basterds. Max: Hey calm down he’s on our side. John: you think I care this guy’s part of that group he doesn’t belong at this country at all. He can be a spy for all we know. Max: Hey, he isn’t a spy okay, he is just another recruit like the rest of us!! John: Well I still don’t trust him. Max: Okay, think what you want but I still- General: Okay, you girls get parachutes ready and get ready to dive into Norway! READY?! Group: READY!SCENE: Max and John are having a conversation, when the general tells the troops to get ready to parachute off of the plane and onto the drop zone where they will meet other men, and battle supplies.
PANEL 46:
Narrator: Abel is soaring through the air and screaming his head off.
Abel: iv never sky dived before! And this is freaking awesome!
Max: yeah this is fun! Wahoo!
Narrator: Abel tries to pull open his parachute and is trying to trying to pull the latches.
Abel: Where the hell is the latch!
Max: on the right of your backpack!
John: this guys stupid he’s doesn’t even know were it is he forgot already!
PANEL 47: Narrator: Max, John, and Abel have just landed on the ground and are all talking. Abel: Hey Max, what am I supposed to do if that one guy John starts talking crap about me again?
Max: Eh don’t worry about him he is just worried about going into battle. Abel: Okay General: Okay everyone the first platoon will go up and meet up with Abel Company to go demo the tanks defending the church we need to take back that church it’s a vital scene to the battlefield. Abel: Sir where is the rest of our squad? General: We will meet up with the rest of our squad over by those crumbled ruins over there. I’ll radio the rest of the squad. Narrator: Abel and max go over to the crumbled ruins and wait. Sooner or later all of the squad meets at the ruins.SCENE: Abel and the rest of the platoon’s are meeting up after the drop, and the general is describing where they will all meet up.PANEL 48: General: Ok, I just radioed the Abel Company and they said they’ll meet in front of the church. Let’s move men! Abel: Hey come on let’s go. Max + John: Calm down were coming!! Able: okay General: Hurry up men, we have our other squad over there trying to hold of the Germans at the church.Narrator: The squad gets to the front of the church and they all duck behind the ruble that was destroyed by panzers (A type of German tank). Abel: Ok uh how do we do this sir? Max: Hey don’t worry we’ll get through this. John: stupid Nazi won’ make it out of here alive. General: shut up John! We have work to get to work, you Thomas go escort the squad to the front of the church. Narrator: Abel, Max and john go with Thomas the front of the church is full of gravestones and they run through the front of the church they all duck behind gravestones bullets barely missed Abel and the bullets mixed in with the gravestones. Abel: Geez! Let’ move again. Narrator: Thomas runs right to the front door and the Germans controlling the Machine gun one of the Germans get off the machine gun and runs to the front doors to guard it and Abel and Max run to the front door. Thomas blows up the door and they go inside ducking behind the church seats. Thomas goes in and shoots the German ducking behind the church seats with his only pistol.SCENE: Max, Abel, John, Thomas all go inside the church to kill the Germans that are still in the church.PANEL 49: Narrator: The Germans dismount the Machine guns and go downstairs to fight off the American soldiers who are downstairs. John: Krauts! Abel: Shi-!Narrator: Abel surprisingly ducks behind seats and Max shoots down the German behind the first German going down stairs the second one falls onto the German in front and the German is trying to get the other German off him Thomas goes up and takes his M1 Garand and shoots him in the head Thomas: All clear! Abel: Thank god. General: Ok we have to hold this church until more reinforcements arrive! John: Sir I think I see more panzers coming this way. General: good god we don’t stand a chance against that many tanks. Abel: What if we radio in for some of our tanks to come in and destroy the enemies? General: That might work, John get over here!! John: Yes general. General: I need you to radio in these coordinates and tell the tanks to get over here as soon as possible we need all the fire power we can get. John: Yes sir!!Scene: John and the rest of the platoon is at the church taking out the Germans when they see that the enemy has brought reinforcements with their tanks.Panel 50: Narrator: John, Abel, Thomas, Max, and the general are all in the church waiting for the tanks to come and are trying to take out some of the ground troops that are behind the tanks but are barely able to because of the enemy fire from the machine guns mounted on one of the tanks. General: Where are those damn airplanes, were taking to much enemy fire!! Abel: General we have got to take cover there is to much fire power! * BOOM BOOM BOOM* John: Yes their here lets show those bastards what we can do to them!Scene: The tanks have just arrived on time before the troops were about to have to retreat from so much enemy fire. The ground was cleared by the American tanks and the church was regained by the Americans. Everyone is at the church trying to take out the enemy.Panel 51: Narrator: Thomas is positioned on top of the church since he is a sharp shooter. The others are outside of the church patrolling for the enemy and searching if there are any Americans as there has been a battle here before. General: Keep a look out men we never know when the enemy can show up. They must know that the church has been taken over by us. Abel: What do we do when there are more ground troops general? General: Well I have called for reinforcements so hopefully by the time that the enemy gets here our troops will be here. John: you better hope so.Scene: All of the men are waiting at the church for the reinforcements to get there and waiting for the enemy.Panel 51: Thomas: SHOTS FIRED!!! General: Where are they coming from! Get rid of those sniping basterd’s now!! Thomas: I don’t know I can’t see anything there must be a sharp shooter around here some place. General: John get out of here and go to the building with the shooters, look for any snipers…NOW! John: yes sir!Scene: There was a shot fired and the men who ware at the church have no idea where it is coming from so they send John up to look for any sharp shooter while the others stay covered in the church.Panel 52: Narrator: John has spotted the enemy sharp shooter while the others think of a way to take him out because Thomas has ran out of clips for his sniper and the regular guns wont reach the shooter. General: Okay men I think I have an idea but it’s pretty risky. Everyone: Okay lets here it sir General: There is a broken down tank close to the tower and some bunkers on the way over to the tank. If we can make it to the tank we can send Abel up to the top and kill the sharp shooter and we can make it to where the rest of the troops are, because that’s where we meet up so we can hold off that sniping position. John: Lets do it guys. Abel, Max, Thomas: Were in lets go. General: Okay when I throw the smoke bomb we run to the tank and take cover. And I will throw the grenade to the left to distract the shooter. *BOOM* The grenade explodes and the smoke bomb goes off. General: GO! GO! GO!Scene: The men are running to the tank to take cover from the sharp shooter.Panel 53: General: Okay Abel here take this pistol and the knife, you will need it once you take him out wave your pistol around and come down. Abel: Okay sir General: Good luckScene: Abel and the general are talking while taking cover behind the tank with the others and talking and Able is getting ready to take out the sharp shooter.Panel 54: Narrator: Abel is climbing up the latter to go to the top of the tower and reaches it. Abel: Almost there (as he says to himself) Abel: Okay you sum-bitch its time for you to- Garry: What the hell?! Abel: Garry- uhh *raises his pistol*
*the two are standing in a fighting position*
Garry: I joined the war! Now I have to kill you!
Narrator: Abel raises his pistol and whacks Garry in the head with his gun Garry gets knocked in the nose and starts bleeding and gets up and punches Abel in the face. Garry is about to punch him again but Abel raises his pistol again and fires. *a pistol shot was fired and Garry punches Abel in the stomach because he knows that Abel was sent to kill him* Garry: I have a job to do, bye Abel. Narrator: Garry and Abel are fighting each other when Garry gets stabbed in the right part of his chest. Abel has punctured one of his lungs and Garry has little time to live. Garry: B- bye Ab--- Abel. Narrator: Garry has died and the men continue on to go meet up with the rest of the men waiting at the tank.
Scene: Abel stares at Garry’s bleeding body and run’s downstairs with no regrets.
PANEL 56:
Narrator: Before Abel runs downstairs he looks out the little church’s Arched window and sees about 3 or 4 people running from the place with some red thing on their shoulders he runs downstairs and trips over the stairs and falls over and gets knocked out from the nervousness his legs were shaking.
General: Get up soldier you’ll be fine
Narrator: Abel gets up from being knocked out and is awakened next to his squad fighting a division of German soldiers.
Thomas: Watch out Stukas!!
General: Take cover, go under the tank!
Narrator: Abel tries climbing under the tank he knows the stuka is right above him he shuts his eyes.
Narrator: The stukas fly right over the squad.
John: I don’t think those planes were aimed for us.
Abel: then what’s over there that the planes were trying to get?
General: I don’t know. Abel! Go up to the tower to get a good view of the city!
Abel: ugh I don’t feel so well.
General:*Sigh* ok max go up to the tower!
Scene: Abel is scared to death of the stukas and can recover from the knockout a while ago.
Narrator: Max goes up to the tower and overlooks the rubles of the city.
Max: I see nothing sarge!
General: ill try and radio some squads to find out whats going-
Radio: Abel company come in..
Narrator: general listens to the radio.
General: Abel company is not hear right now.
Radio: who is this?
General: division 42. And who is this?
Radio: oh right we have a problem.
Scene: general is very curious is to why those planes just passed over them.
Panel 58:
Radio: seems like the few tanks that saved your sorry asses at the church got destroyed by some of those screaming planes just now.
General: what were those tanks doing?
Radio: Well apparently our division troops found a small base of operations with a lot of German infantry and weapons and even some tanks under construction and our tanks found some flak 88s along the route that were firing at our air division earlier.
General: So what are you radioing us for?
Radio: We want your squad to have a little reconnaissance mission and check out the area before our planes go back over there that place is heavily defended.
General: Ok where is this place do you know where or what its called?
Radio: The small city is called Aachen.
General: Ok my squad will go over there in a bit.
Scene: the squad is getting ready for the reconnaissance mission and Abel is once again scared.
PANEL 59:
Narrator: The squad takes a walk through the abandoned German city and soon sees the sign *Heißen Sie willkommen nach Aachen*
General: looks like were here boys, Ok squad when we get to the gates well call- hold on did anyone know where Abel company went to?
Abel: Are they were big red crosses on there shoulders?
General: yes they are, why?
Abel: Then I think I saw them when I was up in the sniping tower leaving toward Aachen.
Scene: General is deciding how to blow up the front door with his squad the rest of the squad is just sitting awaiting orders.
PANEL 60:
Narrator: Looks over the wall and around the while building but there’s no way in and Abel sees some guards behind the fence.
PANEL 61:
General: Then why didn’t you say something?
Abel: I was going to but then I fell down the stairs…
General: *sighs* Ok, does anyone have any C3 charges on them?
Thomas: I think I do sir.
General: Ok, let’s go up to the front gates through the forest.
Narrator: The squad goes through forest and is right against the wall of the gates they have not been spotted by the guards in the tower because the trees were too thick for them to see.
General: Ok, Thomas go up to the gate and set the demo charges.
Thomas: ok, here I go.
Narrator: Thomas goes up to the gate and attaches the C3 to the gate. The guard turns around and is curious as to what made the sound. *Wer gibt es?*
BY: DERRICK DRAGERT
NARRATOR: While Adel is helping Abel with his test Abel finishes his test with the help of his best friend Adel since 2nd grade.Abel: Thanks for helping me with my test.Adel: No problem that’s what I do.SCENE: They’re walking down the hallway and talking about the test.PANEL 4:Abel: Hey want to go to Garry’s house?Adel: Oh sure, wanna play Baseball at his house?SCENE: Their walking to There friends house (Garry).PANEL 5:NARRATIVE: Garry pops out of nowhere and shoot down his friends with his bbgun, while his friends duck for cover behind the trashcans like it was a barbarian assault.Garry: Did I kill anyone?Abel: Almost!SCENE: Abel and Adel ducked behind trashcans too avoid getting shot with Garry’s Rifle.PANEL 6:Abel: Hey you almost shot my eye out with that thing!Garry: *laughs* sorry guys I just wanna take a shot at someone I wasn’t gonna shoot you or anything my parents don’t mind anyway.SCENE: Abel and Adel get out from behind the trashcans.Panel 7:Abel and Adel: Hey stop firing! Garry: You guys never wanna do anything with me!Scene: All of them are in the lot getting ready to head on home.Narrative: The next day at school.
PANEL 8:
Teacher: Ok students something has arisen in this country today, we have gotten new test books, Garry can you pass out the new textbooks.
Abel: New?
Garry: ok
NARRARATOR: Garry passes the books to everyone and sits down.
SCENE: Garry is passing out text books around with a strange look on his face, Abel looks through the text book and is surprised to see that this guy names Hitler was the greatest person in the world and so was Germany the greatest country in the world.
Teacher: We will learn more about this tomorrow! Dismissed! Panel 10: Narrator: Abel and Adel talk about if they finished their homework.Abel: Hey did you finish your homework?Adel: Yeah, I did –*The German people need to revolt against those who are inferior to the German race! There is no one better than us and these united nations will pay for what they did to us and we are the best Germans out there!Abel: What the hell was that??Narrator: Abel looked around on the walls of the classroom and saw what appeared to be what looked like Germans being compared to other “phony” Germans.SCENE: The class is looking out the windows wondering what is happening, while the teacher was trying to calm the class down.Panel 12:Adel: I think that was Adolf Hitler making his speeches to the German people.Abel: I’ve never heard of him before.Adel: Oh, well you should he’s a great person with a big dream.Abel: cool, ill try and look him up, I’m gonna go to the library after school.SCENE: The class is getting all riled up about Hitler making his speech.Panel 13:Narrative: Later that night… he enters the libraryAbel: Hey Madam.Madam: hey Abel, what are you looking up today?Abel: just some research on Adolf Hitler.Madam: Oh, I can already tell you who he is.SCENE: He talking to the librarian lady who is telling him about Adolf Hitler.PANEL 14:Madam: Hitler is a great man with great dreams and he is now Chancellor of Germany.Abel: What is he doing right now? I mean like what is this big fuss about his speeches.Madam: Well These non- Aryans, these Jewish people, these non German people are taking our economy and now Germany has no money they have been taking all the jobs and screwing up our economy he is planning to just get rid of all these non blooded German people in our country and uhh setting them aside…SCENE: The librarian is telling Abel who Hitler is and telling him what a great thing he is doing for his country.PANEL 15:Abel: wow I never knew about our economy being that horrible.Madam: That’s why we just to make this country better we will just send them away.Abel: What is the country of Germany to do about these non-blooded Germans?Madam: uhhh-Abel: Are they planning to kill them all? I mean what else is there to do?Abel: He will kill a bunch of innocent people, will he!?Madam: Sir, you can’t yell in this library, and I’m sure there is another way.Abel: Hitler will kill a bunch of innocent people just because their not German?!?!?!?!?!?!?SCENE: Abel is yelling at the librarian about how evil Hitler is.PANEL 16:Abel: He can’t just kill all the non German people just because of what he thinks!!Madam: I’m sorry that you have been kicked out of the library.Abel: you know what! You and Hitler can go to hell.SCENE: That the librarian is kicking out Abel while Abel is still cursing at Madam.PANEL 17:Narrator: Garry is surprisingly at the library shooting peoples reading glasses off while their reading. He over hears the conversation between him and at the next day at school Garry tells his friends about what happened at the library.Abel: hey guys guess what happened at the library?Garry: I know what happened.Abel: Oh really?Garry: This guy is arguing with the librarian about Hitler.Adel: Hey, Hitler is a good guy I think we should listen to him after all, He is our führer.Abel: you know, Hitler, he’s gonna kill a bunch of innocent Jews because of his stupid speech he made?Garry: Hey his speeches were awesome! You don’t even know! What kind of German are you! (Punches Abel in the face)Abel: What the hell is wrong with you!?Garry: he deserve it; Hitler is our father of this country!SCENE: Abel is laying on the floor with blood trickling down his face. While Garry is still screaming at him.NARRATOR: Adel is looking at Abel laying on the ground Adel is looking at him deciding to help him, but leaves with his friends.PANEL 15:NARRATOR: The next day Abel goes to school and sits quietly in his seat, the class gives him dirty looks even the teacher.Teacher: The principal would like to see you inside the office Mr. WeberAbel: ok…. *gets up and walks out, someone throws a paper ball at his head*Teacher: GARRY!!-NARRATOR: He walks into the principles office and takes a seat…Principle: I heard about your little problem yesterday?Abel: Oh, it was nothing.Principle: Didn’t sound like nothing almost the whole school knows about the little fight you and Garry had.Abel: *sighs* Its just I guess my friends don’t like me talking about Hitler..SCENE: The principle and Abel are talking about what happened yesterday.PANEL 16:Principle: Hitler? He is too young for you to understand.Abel: Well I know enough that he is not right for our country, He is gonna kill thousands of Jewish people to solve this economy issue!Principle: You know I told you your to young to understand.Abel: God you stupid people don’t know what your doing! The next thing you know your gonna start a world war because other people disagree between your genocide! *storms out of the office and building*SCENE: he walks out of the building and goes to his house.PANEL 17:Mom: Hey son are you ok? I though school got out late today?Abel: The kids are beating me up and teasing me because I don’t believe in Hitler and his speeches! I don’t like Hitler at all.Mom: Um I’m sure if knew his dream you would understand him.Abel: I don’t understand why no one will disagree with Hitler….Mom: Look you will fit in perfectly fine if maybe you can understand Hitler and his sayings.Abel: No one understands what the hell their doing around here anymore! We are killing so many people with this war like situation, I mean im getting beat up and teased just because of what I think!! *storms out of house*Mom: Honey…-SCENE: The son and mom are arguing about the school situation and Hitler Abel storms out of the house.PANEL 18: Narrator: Abel is walking along the street thinking about how much his life is screwed up “ I should move to somewhere else when I’m older”…He goes back to school and sees his former friends. Garry: Hey! Its Abel Adel: hey Abel… Abel: Are you guys gonna make fun of me again? Garry: ha-ha, damn right. Abel: Look how about you forget about what I think and just move on. Garry; We don’t want no Jewish believers in our country, your not a real German! Abel: fine maybe ill move!!. Garry: Move then, id like to see that.SCENE: Abel goes back to school during lunch to eat.PANEL 19: Garry: Get out of here we don’t want you in our school!! Abel: I have the right to stay in this school if I want to. Garry: hey guys this guy is a Jewish Believer and he hates Hitler for it! Adel: hey, Garry just stop messing with him we don’t want any problems. Garry: No, this basterd doesn’t belong in this school or our country!Scene: Abel, Garry, Adel and other school members are in the lunch hall eating and Abel is getting picked on again.Panel 20: Narrator: The next day at Abel’s house. Abel is talking on the phone to his Dad So he drops out of high school and his parents don’t mind as long as he gets an education in America. Abel: Hey, so you don’t mind right Dad: No not at all son, you’re always welcome to come here. You just have to know that this will be a big change for you. Abel: Yeah well right about now that’s what I’m looking for. Dad: So do you know when you will be coming over? Abel: Maybe in four or five days, right now I just have to get the plane ticket. Dad: Well I hope to see you soon. Abel: yeah me to. Dad: see you in America. Abel: Bye.Scene: Abel is sitting in his room talking to his dad who is in America. And talking to his dad about how is going to move over to America where he knows that he will be able to say what he wants.Panel 21: Narrator: Abel and his mom are talking to his mom about the move that he is going to leave soon and live with his dad. Abel: Look mom I’m doing this for my own good I cant go anyplace without getting beat up or picked on and personally I am tired of it. Mom: Okay son I understand just promise me you will write to me. Abel: Mom I will, and don’t worry I will be fine.
….Scene: Abel and his mom are sitting in their living room talking about the move. Abel’s mom is sad about the move but she is starting to understand where he is coming from.Panel 22: Narrator: Abel is saying goodbye to his mom and Adel. He decided not to bother about his other friends because he knew that he would just end up getting harassed again. Abel: Well I guess this is it… Adel: Hey man I hope you do alright over there okay, take it easy. Abel: alright, ill write to you about how America is. Adel: hope you don’t get killed over there too. Mom: Son I just want you to know that if you ever want to come back I have no problem. I want you to be careful okay, I love you. Abel: I love you too mom. (Gives her a hug and kiss goodbye)Scene: Adel, Abel, and his mom are at the airport getting ready to say goodbye, before Abel boards his plain.Panel 23: Narrator: Abel thinks to himself about his opportunity to go to America for a better life. Abel: Wow finally I get to get away from those bastards, always calling me names and beating me up. Narrator: Abel falls to sleep on the way over to America. When he wakes up he is in America for his first time.Scene: Abel is in the plane, and then transfers over to America when he wakes up.Panel 24: Narrator: Abel isn’t used to all the lights and noise that he is recognizing. He tries to find his way to his dad’s house. He tries to find a way to contact his dad and finds a payphone at the airport. Abel: Excuse me sir, do you know were a payphone is? Sir: Yeah, its over there next to the food stand. Abel: thanks Sir: No problem.Scene: Abel gets to the airport and is walking to a pay phone.Panel 25: Narrator: Abel picks up the payphone and puts in random coins until he hears the ringtone in the phone. Abel: Dad! I’m in America! I’m in New York City. Dad: really? I didn’t know it was gonna be this early. Abel: How do I get to your house Father? Dad: Don’t worry ill give you the directions.SCENEL: Abel’s father is giving his son directions to get to his house.Panel 26: Dad: Ok? Got that? Abel: yeah I have it all down. Dad: ok cool see you here. Abel: Um, dad how do I get there? Dad: I just gave you the- Abel: yeah I know but like how? Ride a bus or something? Dad: oh.. I forgot about that I don’t know son I don’t think it’s far from here though. Abel: ok I guess ill walk then. Dad: see ya son. Abel: bye father.Scene: Abel and Father are talking on the payphone.PANEL 27: Narrator: Abel walks out of the airport and takes a deep breath. *wow I like this place already. Abel: “whoa” Abel says to himself as he looks around. Narrator: Abel walks along the streets crowded with pedestrians at the new pizza place that just opened. – “Congratulations on the new carls Jr. that just opened! Unfortunately Carl is not with us today he is busy creating new burgers!” *laughter* Abel looked at the restaurant astounded. He’s never seen so many people crowded around a restaurant. Abel: excuse me sire what is this? Sir 2: This is Carls JR my friend! It has the best burgers in the state wanna try one when it opens? Abel: really? Sir 2: yeah man I’m so exited this is your lucky day. Here’s a buck. Abel: A buck? Sir 2: ha-ha yeah in other words a dollar. Hey where are you from? Abel: uhhh, I’m from… I forgot the name of the country… Sir 2: ha-ha I like you kid c’mon lets go inside.Scene: Abel and this guy go inside Carls Jr. and they order a milkshake and a regular burger. Narrator: “Here’s your change” the cashier said Abel: Hey is that money? Sir 2: yeah it’s an American dollar. Abel: cool, wow this food is amazing. Sir 2: I told you, we should come here often, where do you live? Abel: well I’m trying to find my dad… he uh moved somewhere. Sir 2: where he live?Scene: Abel and the stranger talk for a while he offers him a ride home.Panel 28: Narrator: Abel tells the stranger where he lives and they get into his car and take him to his dads. Sir 2; is this it? Abel: Uhh check the address I don’t know. Sir 2: yeah this is it. Abel: thanks Sir 2: no problem. Abel: bye.SCENE: Abel is Saying bye to the guy he just met and is going inside his father’s house.Panel 29: Narrator: Abel gets out of the car and walks to the front door of his dad’s house. Abel: *Knock Knock* Dad: I’m coming hold on! Abel: Dad…it’s me Abel. Dad: Son, it’s been such a long time, we have a lot to catch up on. Come in. Abel: Wow dad this is a nice place, compared to what mom has. Dad: eh it gets me by.Scene: Abel and his dad are finally meeting after a long time.Panel 30: Narrator: Abel and his Dad are talking to each other because they haven’t seen each other in a long time. Dad: So son what have you been up to lately? Abel; Well school never really goes that good, because people are always beating me up!! Dad: oh…….well why don’t you fight back? Abel: I don’t know I guess I just never had anyone to back me up. I really never had any friends. Scene: Abel and his dad are talking how his life was and just catching up with their lives.Panel 31: Narrator: Abel and his dad are watching TV and are watching their favorite TV show. When a news flash comes on. *War break out in Europe, tune to channel thirteen for more information* Abel: Wow dad can you believe this, and to think that I was just there. Dad: I know, I hope your mother is okay. Abel: Those bastards they shouldn’t just have the right to go in an start a war with us. Scene: Abel and his dad are sitting in the living room watching TVPanel 32: Narrator: Abel is looking for a job as seeing that this will be where he is going to live his life. Abel: Hmmmm…..no, maybe. Dad: Why you talking to yourself, are you crazy or something? Abel: No dad I am just looking for a job. Dad: O well why don’t you try working at that burger place. Abel: I will go check it out, hey dad I am going to leave to see if there is an opening. Dad: Okay see you when you get home. Scene: Abel and his dad are talking about jobs in their kitchen.Panel 33: Narrator: That next day… Abel: Hey dad last night when I got home I guess you were gone so, I just wanted to let you know that I got the job and I start on Monday. Dad: That’s good son. You know this war is starting to get to become a big deal even though its far away. Abel: Yeah I know but I don’t think we have anything to worry about dad. I just hope that Adel and mom are alright. Dad: I guess your right son Scene: Its morning time at the house and Abel and his dad are sitting down talking about his new job and the war that’s currently going on in Europe.Panel 34: Narrator: Time has passed bye Abel has been working at Carls Jr. for about four days now and liking the job. Dad: Hey son come here real quickly you got a letter in the mail. Abel: Huh a letter…let me see it. Maybe its from Adel or mom. Dad: Well what does it say? Abel: It says….that I have been drafted into the war; they need more soldiers I leave in a week. Dad: What?!?!, they cant just do this to you those bastards what the hell is there problem Scene: Abel and his dad are sitting on the couch flipping through the mail when a letter comes up for Abel and he reads it.Panel 35: Narrator: Abel is lying on his bed writing a letter to his mom telling her what has just happened: Abel: I have been drafted into the US Army. I guess my stay over here isn’t going as how I had planned it. I hope you are okay. I will try my best to stay alive over there. I have heard that’s its pretty crazy. From, Your son Abel.Panel 36: Narrator. Abel is getting ready to go to work for his last day. Abel: Dad I’m going to work now, see you when I get home! Dad: Okay see you when you get home.Scene: Abel is standing at the front door saying goodbye to his dad before he leaves for work.Panel 36: Narrator: Abel is getting home from work his dad is already eating dinner and Abel goes to join him. Dad: How was work? Abel: Ok, besides the fact that I have to leave for Europe tomorrow and go into war. *Says with sarcastic remark* Dad: I know.. I’ll miss you son! God pray you come back alive. (hugs Abel)
Abel: Don’t worry dad I will, you know your starting to sound like mom right before I left for America. *light chuckle* Scene: Abel and his dad are sitting down eating dinner and talking about when he leaves to go off to war.Panel 36: Narrator: Abel is getting ready to leave where he will meet up with the other future soldiers who have been drafted. Abel: Well dad I guess this is it. Dad: Yeah son it is. Take care okay. I know that it will probably be hard for you to write but if you can please write. Abel: Okay I will. It was good seeing you again. Scene: Abel is saying good bye to his dad and getting ready to leave for the area where he is meeting the others.Panel 37: Narrator: Abel gets into and tells the taxi cab driver where to take him. Abel: Take me to Smith and Montgomery please. Taxi Driver: I have taken a couple of others there today you one of those recruits ay. Abel: Yup just another one of those recruits. Taxi Driver: Well I wish you the best of luck over there. Abel: Thanks I just wish I wasn’t going.Scene: Abel is in the taxi getting ready to go to the spot where all the recruits are. Panel 38: Narrator: Abel gets on the bus and sits next to some guy with brown hair. The bus begins to drive off to the base. Abel: Hey my name is Abel. Max: Hey how you doing up man, where you from? Abel: Umm…. Well, Max: You don’t know where you’re from? Abel: … I am from Germany, *He says shyly knowing that this is who they are going to fight* Max: Wow that’s a tough place to come from and You sound German to, better not let anyone else know, or else your going to get your ass beat. Abel: Alright well it was nice meeting you where are you from? Max: I am from New York. Abel: Well…I am tired wake me up when the ride is over to the base.Scene: Abel and his friend that he just met on the bus are going to the base where all the other troops are.Panel 39: They recruits are about to reach the base and get assigned to where they will be staying until they get transported over to the drop zone in Europe. Its 10:00 pm at the base Max: Hey, hey man wake up were here. Abel: Huh? oh already wow that was fast. Max: Yeah they just announced that were all supposed to meet outside and that’s when we will be assigned to our rooms. Abel: Alright then let’s go.Scene: Abel and his friend are leaving the bus and going to their rooms. It is now one week till they deploy for Europe.Panel 40: Narrator: All of the recruits wake up to the sound of a loud bell and the general telling them to get up.General: Wake up you lazy recruits we only have one week to prepare for Europe* Abel: Oh great time to train just what I have always wanted to wake up to. Max: Come on put your boots on, we don’t have all day now do we. Abel: Calm down I’m going.Scene: Abel and the rest of the recruits are getting ready to go and train.Panel 41: Narrator: Three days has passed by there is now only three days left until they get ready to deploy. Abel: Hey man so you think that you’re ready for battle. Max: Eh not really I wish I was back home with my family instead of knowing that I am headed until battle. Abel: I watch your back and you watch mine we should be alright. Max: Yeah I guess so, well we better get some food. Scene: Abel and Max are getting ready to go to the lunch room at the base.Panel 42: Narrator: Abel and everyone else is getting ready to pack their clothes and items before they get ready to deploy. Abel: I don’t get how we only have a week. Max: Hey the American army needs more people. Abel: we don’t even train. Max: *laughs* Hell, with us in the war those Nazis don’t even have a day to train they need all the men they can get. Abel: I’m tired I’m going to bed. Max: Bed? How can you think of sleep at this time, after all were still in “training”? Abel: *sigh* Fine lets get back in their. Max: Ill arm-wrestle you. Abel: Arm wrestle? Max: yeah, why not I want to see how strong you are since last week. Scene: Max and Abel prepare to arm-wrestle.Panel 43: Abel: Alright. Max: ha you don’t stand a chance. Abel: oh, yeah. Narrator: they arm wrestle a bit and are their hands are an even match. Max: arghh! Ha beat yah. Abel: *chuckles* I’m tired man. Max: See I knew- General: Get up you lousy Basterds! Time to get on the plane to parachute into Norway! Abel: Norway? Max: Yes sir *puts up a salute to the General* Abel: Uhhh Yes Sir!! Scene: The two soldiers salute to the General with a surprised look on their face.Panel 44: General: Let’s move lets move!!! Max: let’s go Abel. General: Holt their soldier! Your names Abel? Abel: uhh yeesssss sirrrr *shudders’* General: *laughs* No need to be scared soldier theirs a company on our team called the Abel company and you and the rest of your squad will parachute together onto Norway and help Abel company demo the tanks that are holding our ground. Abel: Why us????! *whimpers* General: Are you gonna whimper like my dog did when he had to sniff out my lost socks?! Abel: No sir! General: lets go kill these Nazi bastards! Abel: I will kill these!- *cries* Scene: General is yelling at Abel And telling him to coward out. General: What’s wrong with you! Get up! Narrator: Max whispers in Generals ear that he came from Germany and lived there all his life. General: Oh, *Straightens up* your in America son! Dry up those tears and get outside! Abel: Ok sir. Max: C’mon lets get on that plane. Narrator: Abel and max get on the plane and aboard it with their other group.Panel 45: Narrator: Max and Abel, and including all the other recruits are on the plane meeting others. When John Coffman comes up to the two, and introduces himself. When John finds out Abel’s accent. John: Hey what’s up? Max: Hey are you in our group too? John: Yeah, why do you think that were on this plane together. Abel: *Snickers* (Abel doesn’t feel so shy anymore) you’re a funny guy John: huh? You sound like one of them Kraut basterds. Max: Hey calm down he’s on our side. John: you think I care this guy’s part of that group he doesn’t belong at this country at all. He can be a spy for all we know. Max: Hey, he isn’t a spy okay, he is just another recruit like the rest of us!! John: Well I still don’t trust him. Max: Okay, think what you want but I still- General: Okay, you girls get parachutes ready and get ready to dive into Norway! READY?! Group: READY!SCENE: Max and John are having a conversation, when the general tells the troops to get ready to parachute off of the plane and onto the drop zone where they will meet other men, and battle supplies.
PANEL 46:
Narrator: Abel is soaring through the air and screaming his head off.
Abel: iv never sky dived before! And this is freaking awesome!
Max: yeah this is fun! Wahoo!
Narrator: Abel tries to pull open his parachute and is trying to trying to pull the latches.
Abel: Where the hell is the latch!
Max: on the right of your backpack!
John: this guys stupid he’s doesn’t even know were it is he forgot already!
PANEL 47: Narrator: Max, John, and Abel have just landed on the ground and are all talking. Abel: Hey Max, what am I supposed to do if that one guy John starts talking crap about me again?
Max: Eh don’t worry about him he is just worried about going into battle. Abel: Okay General: Okay everyone the first platoon will go up and meet up with Abel Company to go demo the tanks defending the church we need to take back that church it’s a vital scene to the battlefield. Abel: Sir where is the rest of our squad? General: We will meet up with the rest of our squad over by those crumbled ruins over there. I’ll radio the rest of the squad. Narrator: Abel and max go over to the crumbled ruins and wait. Sooner or later all of the squad meets at the ruins.SCENE: Abel and the rest of the platoon’s are meeting up after the drop, and the general is describing where they will all meet up.PANEL 48: General: Ok, I just radioed the Abel Company and they said they’ll meet in front of the church. Let’s move men! Abel: Hey come on let’s go. Max + John: Calm down were coming!! Able: okay General: Hurry up men, we have our other squad over there trying to hold of the Germans at the church.Narrator: The squad gets to the front of the church and they all duck behind the ruble that was destroyed by panzers (A type of German tank). Abel: Ok uh how do we do this sir? Max: Hey don’t worry we’ll get through this. John: stupid Nazi won’ make it out of here alive. General: shut up John! We have work to get to work, you Thomas go escort the squad to the front of the church. Narrator: Abel, Max and john go with Thomas the front of the church is full of gravestones and they run through the front of the church they all duck behind gravestones bullets barely missed Abel and the bullets mixed in with the gravestones. Abel: Geez! Let’ move again. Narrator: Thomas runs right to the front door and the Germans controlling the Machine gun one of the Germans get off the machine gun and runs to the front doors to guard it and Abel and Max run to the front door. Thomas blows up the door and they go inside ducking behind the church seats. Thomas goes in and shoots the German ducking behind the church seats with his only pistol.SCENE: Max, Abel, John, Thomas all go inside the church to kill the Germans that are still in the church.PANEL 49: Narrator: The Germans dismount the Machine guns and go downstairs to fight off the American soldiers who are downstairs. John: Krauts! Abel: Shi-!Narrator: Abel surprisingly ducks behind seats and Max shoots down the German behind the first German going down stairs the second one falls onto the German in front and the German is trying to get the other German off him Thomas goes up and takes his M1 Garand and shoots him in the head Thomas: All clear! Abel: Thank god. General: Ok we have to hold this church until more reinforcements arrive! John: Sir I think I see more panzers coming this way. General: good god we don’t stand a chance against that many tanks. Abel: What if we radio in for some of our tanks to come in and destroy the enemies? General: That might work, John get over here!! John: Yes general. General: I need you to radio in these coordinates and tell the tanks to get over here as soon as possible we need all the fire power we can get. John: Yes sir!!Scene: John and the rest of the platoon is at the church taking out the Germans when they see that the enemy has brought reinforcements with their tanks.Panel 50: Narrator: John, Abel, Thomas, Max, and the general are all in the church waiting for the tanks to come and are trying to take out some of the ground troops that are behind the tanks but are barely able to because of the enemy fire from the machine guns mounted on one of the tanks. General: Where are those damn airplanes, were taking to much enemy fire!! Abel: General we have got to take cover there is to much fire power! * BOOM BOOM BOOM* John: Yes their here lets show those bastards what we can do to them!Scene: The tanks have just arrived on time before the troops were about to have to retreat from so much enemy fire. The ground was cleared by the American tanks and the church was regained by the Americans. Everyone is at the church trying to take out the enemy.Panel 51: Narrator: Thomas is positioned on top of the church since he is a sharp shooter. The others are outside of the church patrolling for the enemy and searching if there are any Americans as there has been a battle here before. General: Keep a look out men we never know when the enemy can show up. They must know that the church has been taken over by us. Abel: What do we do when there are more ground troops general? General: Well I have called for reinforcements so hopefully by the time that the enemy gets here our troops will be here. John: you better hope so.Scene: All of the men are waiting at the church for the reinforcements to get there and waiting for the enemy.Panel 51: Thomas: SHOTS FIRED!!! General: Where are they coming from! Get rid of those sniping basterd’s now!! Thomas: I don’t know I can’t see anything there must be a sharp shooter around here some place. General: John get out of here and go to the building with the shooters, look for any snipers…NOW! John: yes sir!Scene: There was a shot fired and the men who ware at the church have no idea where it is coming from so they send John up to look for any sharp shooter while the others stay covered in the church.Panel 52: Narrator: John has spotted the enemy sharp shooter while the others think of a way to take him out because Thomas has ran out of clips for his sniper and the regular guns wont reach the shooter. General: Okay men I think I have an idea but it’s pretty risky. Everyone: Okay lets here it sir General: There is a broken down tank close to the tower and some bunkers on the way over to the tank. If we can make it to the tank we can send Abel up to the top and kill the sharp shooter and we can make it to where the rest of the troops are, because that’s where we meet up so we can hold off that sniping position. John: Lets do it guys. Abel, Max, Thomas: Were in lets go. General: Okay when I throw the smoke bomb we run to the tank and take cover. And I will throw the grenade to the left to distract the shooter. *BOOM* The grenade explodes and the smoke bomb goes off. General: GO! GO! GO!Scene: The men are running to the tank to take cover from the sharp shooter.Panel 53: General: Okay Abel here take this pistol and the knife, you will need it once you take him out wave your pistol around and come down. Abel: Okay sir General: Good luckScene: Abel and the general are talking while taking cover behind the tank with the others and talking and Able is getting ready to take out the sharp shooter.Panel 54: Narrator: Abel is climbing up the latter to go to the top of the tower and reaches it. Abel: Almost there (as he says to himself) Abel: Okay you sum-bitch its time for you to- Garry: What the hell?! Abel: Garry- uhh *raises his pistol*
*the two are standing in a fighting position*
Garry: I joined the war! Now I have to kill you!
Narrator: Abel raises his pistol and whacks Garry in the head with his gun Garry gets knocked in the nose and starts bleeding and gets up and punches Abel in the face. Garry is about to punch him again but Abel raises his pistol again and fires. *a pistol shot was fired and Garry punches Abel in the stomach because he knows that Abel was sent to kill him* Garry: I have a job to do, bye Abel. Narrator: Garry and Abel are fighting each other when Garry gets stabbed in the right part of his chest. Abel has punctured one of his lungs and Garry has little time to live. Garry: B- bye Ab--- Abel. Narrator: Garry has died and the men continue on to go meet up with the rest of the men waiting at the tank.
Scene: Abel stares at Garry’s bleeding body and run’s downstairs with no regrets.
PANEL 56:
Narrator: Before Abel runs downstairs he looks out the little church’s Arched window and sees about 3 or 4 people running from the place with some red thing on their shoulders he runs downstairs and trips over the stairs and falls over and gets knocked out from the nervousness his legs were shaking.
General: Get up soldier you’ll be fine
Narrator: Abel gets up from being knocked out and is awakened next to his squad fighting a division of German soldiers.
Thomas: Watch out Stukas!!
General: Take cover, go under the tank!
Narrator: Abel tries climbing under the tank he knows the stuka is right above him he shuts his eyes.
Narrator: The stukas fly right over the squad.
John: I don’t think those planes were aimed for us.
Abel: then what’s over there that the planes were trying to get?
General: I don’t know. Abel! Go up to the tower to get a good view of the city!
Abel: ugh I don’t feel so well.
General:*Sigh* ok max go up to the tower!
Scene: Abel is scared to death of the stukas and can recover from the knockout a while ago.
Narrator: Max goes up to the tower and overlooks the rubles of the city.
Max: I see nothing sarge!
General: ill try and radio some squads to find out whats going-
Radio: Abel company come in..
Narrator: general listens to the radio.
General: Abel company is not hear right now.
Radio: who is this?
General: division 42. And who is this?
Radio: oh right we have a problem.
Scene: general is very curious is to why those planes just passed over them.
Panel 58:
Radio: seems like the few tanks that saved your sorry asses at the church got destroyed by some of those screaming planes just now.
General: what were those tanks doing?
Radio: Well apparently our division troops found a small base of operations with a lot of German infantry and weapons and even some tanks under construction and our tanks found some flak 88s along the route that were firing at our air division earlier.
General: So what are you radioing us for?
Radio: We want your squad to have a little reconnaissance mission and check out the area before our planes go back over there that place is heavily defended.
General: Ok where is this place do you know where or what its called?
Radio: The small city is called Aachen.
General: Ok my squad will go over there in a bit.
Scene: the squad is getting ready for the reconnaissance mission and Abel is once again scared.
PANEL 59:
Narrator: The squad takes a walk through the abandoned German city and soon sees the sign *Heißen Sie willkommen nach Aachen*
General: looks like were here boys, Ok squad when we get to the gates well call- hold on did anyone know where Abel company went to?
Abel: Are they were big red crosses on there shoulders?
General: yes they are, why?
Abel: Then I think I saw them when I was up in the sniping tower leaving toward Aachen.
Scene: General is deciding how to blow up the front door with his squad the rest of the squad is just sitting awaiting orders.
PANEL 60:
Narrator: Looks over the wall and around the while building but there’s no way in and Abel sees some guards behind the fence.
PANEL 61:
General: Then why didn’t you say something?
Abel: I was going to but then I fell down the stairs…
General: *sighs* Ok, does anyone have any C3 charges on them?
Thomas: I think I do sir.
General: Ok, let’s go up to the front gates through the forest.
Narrator: The squad goes through forest and is right against the wall of the gates they have not been spotted by the guards in the tower because the trees were too thick for them to see.
General: Ok, Thomas go up to the gate and set the demo charges.
Thomas: ok, here I go.
Narrator: Thomas goes up to the gate and attaches the C3 to the gate. The guard turns around and is curious as to what made the sound. *Wer gibt es?*
BY: DERRICK DRAGERT
Friday, April 18, 2008
Exhibition night project
Exhibition night was ok for me it wasnt that bad this night was all about showing our math and humanties projects and we had to represent these projects to who ever came into our door and came up to our table and asked us questions. This projects was strong for us because we actually knew what we were talking about and our story was about WWII and we were interested in this story paneling our weak points was our story there were alot of un answered questions so were got stuck on those question.
The questions that were asked when we had them asked to us were hard because they made our story not make sence we got past it by just being honest and saying that we didnt think about that and it really made us think of what a failure our story was and alot of things were missing also. We would actually change our story next time and do more work and try to get more things done for our math one on our humanities project we would change our story so it makes more sence so we know what were talking about in our story.
The questions that were asked when we had them asked to us were hard because they made our story not make sence we got past it by just being honest and saying that we didnt think about that and it really made us think of what a failure our story was and alot of things were missing also. We would actually change our story next time and do more work and try to get more things done for our math one on our humanities project we would change our story so it makes more sence so we know what were talking about in our story.
Monday, March 31, 2008
Creating our own book!! synopsis and character bios!
PEOPLE OF THE STORY:
Abel Weber was born in Berlin, Germany in 1921 and he is 6’2” and weighs 181 pounds. He has blonde hair and blue eyes. Was a high school dropout and joined world war 2, and then he got drafted into the American army when he was 19. He moved out of Germany when he was 17 and He did not believe in Hitler’s speeches, his other family members and his friends all believed in his movements, and his acts. He was constantly made fun of and picked on because of what he believed in.
Max Whitfield was born in Washington D.C in 1918 and he is about 6’3 with dark brown hair and he is about 179 pounds his eyes are dark blue. He graduated high school and believed strong in politics.
He was always in shape and played a lot of baseball he was a big fan of the Yankees and his father was a former Yankees outfielder and he collected baseball cards ever since he was 7. He also got drafted into the army.
Adal Heilbronner was born in Berlin, Germany in 1921 and he is 6’1 and weighs about 176 pound and has light brown hair and blue eyes. He was a high school graduate, and graduated at 18. He was very educated in almost every subject and loved helping out people.
John Coffman was born in San Diego, California in 1920 and he’s about 6’4 in height and weighs about 187 pounds and graduated high school at 19. He loved hanging out at the beaches and hanging out with his kids. He has black hair and greenish eyes. He enlisted to the army when he was 21 and was an officer in the 42nd division.
Garry Adelhelm was born in Saxony, Germany in 1919 and he’s about 6’2 feet weighs 176 pounds and graduated high school at 18. He loved to golf with his father and almost got into the golfing tournament with his school until he forced to enter the German forces at 18. This kid loved playing with guns also he had a rifle bbgun and always bring it outside and shot anything he wanted to including kids. This kid was a sharpshooter also he was a good shot he even put a telescope on his rifle to make it even more accurate. He was recruited into the army as a sniper unit.
SYNOPSIS:
Abel was getting ready to leave class as the bell had rang at the end of the day. He walks back to his house and goes to his room to get his homework done. Living in Germany isn’t easy for him because of the conflicts with Hitler and his speeches. He is strictly against what Hitler says unlike many others that he knows. Abel and his friend Adal both believe in different things one follows Hitler and agrees with what he says and Abel doesn’t. They end up not being friends because what the two of them believe in.
Later Abel Moved out of Germany after constant teases and being jumped all the time by his other friends and other people. He couldn’t take any more of Hitler’s speeches and everything that was happening around him. He moved out of Germany in 1938. So he dropped out of high school and He got an apartment in Washington D.C with his dad and soon after living there for about 5 or 6 months his dad got a letter in the mail that told him that he was drafted into the army. So his dad told his son that he should go to war because he didnt have time and Abel agreed to going to war. He thought about this and decided it was a great idea. He thought it was going to be great but all didn’t go as planned.
Abel Weber was born in Berlin, Germany in 1921 and he is 6’2” and weighs 181 pounds. He has blonde hair and blue eyes. Was a high school dropout and joined world war 2, and then he got drafted into the American army when he was 19. He moved out of Germany when he was 17 and He did not believe in Hitler’s speeches, his other family members and his friends all believed in his movements, and his acts. He was constantly made fun of and picked on because of what he believed in.
Max Whitfield was born in Washington D.C in 1918 and he is about 6’3 with dark brown hair and he is about 179 pounds his eyes are dark blue. He graduated high school and believed strong in politics.
He was always in shape and played a lot of baseball he was a big fan of the Yankees and his father was a former Yankees outfielder and he collected baseball cards ever since he was 7. He also got drafted into the army.
Adal Heilbronner was born in Berlin, Germany in 1921 and he is 6’1 and weighs about 176 pound and has light brown hair and blue eyes. He was a high school graduate, and graduated at 18. He was very educated in almost every subject and loved helping out people.
John Coffman was born in San Diego, California in 1920 and he’s about 6’4 in height and weighs about 187 pounds and graduated high school at 19. He loved hanging out at the beaches and hanging out with his kids. He has black hair and greenish eyes. He enlisted to the army when he was 21 and was an officer in the 42nd division.
Garry Adelhelm was born in Saxony, Germany in 1919 and he’s about 6’2 feet weighs 176 pounds and graduated high school at 18. He loved to golf with his father and almost got into the golfing tournament with his school until he forced to enter the German forces at 18. This kid loved playing with guns also he had a rifle bbgun and always bring it outside and shot anything he wanted to including kids. This kid was a sharpshooter also he was a good shot he even put a telescope on his rifle to make it even more accurate. He was recruited into the army as a sniper unit.
SYNOPSIS:
Abel was getting ready to leave class as the bell had rang at the end of the day. He walks back to his house and goes to his room to get his homework done. Living in Germany isn’t easy for him because of the conflicts with Hitler and his speeches. He is strictly against what Hitler says unlike many others that he knows. Abel and his friend Adal both believe in different things one follows Hitler and agrees with what he says and Abel doesn’t. They end up not being friends because what the two of them believe in.
Later Abel Moved out of Germany after constant teases and being jumped all the time by his other friends and other people. He couldn’t take any more of Hitler’s speeches and everything that was happening around him. He moved out of Germany in 1938. So he dropped out of high school and He got an apartment in Washington D.C with his dad and soon after living there for about 5 or 6 months his dad got a letter in the mail that told him that he was drafted into the army. So his dad told his son that he should go to war because he didnt have time and Abel agreed to going to war. He thought about this and decided it was a great idea. He thought it was going to be great but all didn’t go as planned.
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